it IS the freeform thread...
... you've lost me.
check your messages.
I know my poem was pushing my product, and the last stanza was added after the death of my father this past Fall because of a Ripple I thought too powerful to ignore. Many would find the poem more secularly appealing if you change the 1st line, 3rd stanza to "...not a peek at God" and drop the last stanza completely.
Now before I take respite and let you get back to pushing your prod, which seems near infinite, I have one question for you, which you can take as rhetorical or not. Did you really dig the Dead or just find a safe house where you could spread your cred?
"'Oh, Whistle A Few Bars And I'll Fake It, My Lad'"
Wit lacks one when quit to best.
I like the title, " I'm a Detective."
"He Ain't Heavy He's My Butcher"
"You Correct Your Own Vision And Not Ours"
"Eclectic Is Another Word For Shit"
"Choose Your Poison And Don't Look Back"