Grateful Dead

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pkpotter's picture
Joined: Jun 7 2007
Beautiful. Makes me smile

Makes me smile too.

free idea's picture
Joined: Aug 11 2008
standing on the shoulders of giants

Wlaking down the railroad tracks
Counting counting
Flipping that old monkey wrench
Over and over
I see no new tracks in the snow
Now we are where no one goes
Into the midnight breath
Frost growing on the walls
Wind chill advisories
Make me want to take a walk
Riding down the road
Through the night
Watching the highway
Disappear under my feet
If I freeze the scene
It blurs out to clarity
Lines of angels descending
On light beams
Make me smile

JerseySchwartz's picture
Joined: Jun 5 2007
Selfless Breath

With this loss of nothingness, we leave these surroundings a selfless breath
Moment to moment, act to action, these ordinary acts of spirit.

Destroy our transparent cage as liberation takes us to its center of definition
The participants simplify the inevitable, here forth throughout the darkness dismissed.

Quite as a hospital eventually the bedside struggle
Improves unto a condition foreseen as a continuum complete.

Relinquished the voicing falling silently out of mind
Into a formless neutrality, beholden unto a firmaments eternal repletion.

UncleSpace's picture
Joined: Jan 7 2009
Outlaw ALL Dancing!

Please keep writing and always go back to it, you'll just get better and better!
here's an absurd thought -
your Supreme God says
outlaw ALL dancing

moving bodies to music
must be seen as evil

absurd thought -
God of the Universe says
only Earthlings may dance

it is simply forbidden
elsewhere in the Universe

absurd thought -
God of the Universe says
rock and roll is evil

it's the devil's best music
and dancing to it is sin
All real freedom starts with freedom of speech. Without freedom of speech there can be no real freedom.

free idea's picture
Joined: Aug 11 2008
i am not sorry

i am not sorry for the things that are not here
i am happy for the things that are here
I am not wishing for things that are not here
I am enjoying what is here

littlebri's picture
Joined: Oct 15 2007
in the city

It's darker at the bottom,
but atop is where rain falls,
clouds roll, and thunder speaks.
The pace is quick
and folks move fast,
but underneath
its easy to see
those glimpses and shimmers
of life
of freedom
of love
and of course, truth.
I'd rather spend my time
feeling the rain on my face,
enjoying my world of one,
my world that shows
and love.


Joined: Jul 29 2008
The Post-Birthday Haiku

Big plans and high hopes
Darn! Dreams don't always come true
There's always next year!

I have a sigfile! -->

Blue_Jay_Way's picture
Joined: Jun 8 2007
When the big ones

When the big ones die—
well, we’ll never see their like again!
Sad then, a hole in the world,
never to be filled.

Building’s refuse hauled away,
Park, monument,
stone of artful design,
empty air.

The best?
Best thing, to die a small one.
Small things are always here,
no beginning, no end to the line.
We cover Earth with our small joys,
replaceable as rain,
shiny beetles, the many facets of sand.

We don’t go away, we small ones—
and that’s the biggest thing.

TigerLilly's picture
Joined: Jul 2 2007

Amusing me again Mark-not-SO-in-the-Dark! Happy Birthday to You! Did you get your wish?
Don't part with your illusions. When they are gone, you will still exist, but you have ceased to live.
Samuel Clemens

Joined: Nov 21 2007
thanx Mark !!

hahaha , very nice Mark , made me smile !!
one thing I love about poetry , so many way`s to take what one say`s ..
it`s like it`s all in your preception and how one see`s things ..

Oh yes Marye, and many thanks for putting this forum up , it really seems to have helped some folks get their feelings and thoughts out of their heads , I know my head gets quite crowded sometimes , hehe ..
ok now , cookies anyone ?
A pleasent valley sunday for all !!


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