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Really enjoy the gifts shared here

That's what poetry, lyrics, music is, after all. A gift from one heart/soul to another. Thanks to all who share their gifts.

Here's another one. Still rough, but it's getting there.

Can't help but think about
All that might have been
If I'd been a better man
If I'd been a better friend.

Would we have let the lovelight die?
Would we have let the heartache in?
If I'd been a better man
If I'd been a better friend

Well, I should have been a better man
I should have been a better friend
And I never should have let you go
The way I did in the end

It's too late now for turning back
Time has passed to try again
Wish I'd been a better man
Wish I'd been a better friend

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Let it Shine

The notes would fly from his fingers

The drums beat loud and wild

The memory still lingers

Like the smile of a child

Take me back to Terrapin

Lets go to Shakedown Street

I find myself rememberin'

The times that were so sweet

Let it shine on me forever

I will never forget

Just like a wild rushing river

Haven't reached the sea yet...

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Pudding time???

Is that some inside joke/reference, '73 or something just fly right over my head??
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Don't part with your illusions. When they are gone, you will still exist, but you have ceased to live.
Samuel Clemens

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nice peakin

sounds like pudding time : )

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Here's a thought

II: I see you walk walk walkin' in the sunshine
I see you dance dance dancin' in the daytime :||

II: I see you everywhere, everywhere there is a there,
you're unaware I'm even there, but still.. :||

I see you walk walk walkin' out on the street
You're always smiling at everyone you meet

II: I see you walk walk walkin'
I see you smilin, I see you smilin' :II

II: I see you walk walk walkin' in the sunshine
I see you dance dance dancin' in the daytime :||

-andy

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very nice

really like that one.

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Shower of Love 8/22/08

I look at the stars
Floating in the sky
I'm stuck in a rut
And I wonder why
I need a jack
And I need a tow
I need a miracle
To get to the show

Along came a maiden
With love in her eyes
And for me she stopped
While I sat surprized
And then she said
May I give you a hand?
I'd like to help
I'm with the band

And I can see
You've been through enough
Come on and take
A shower of Love
Clean up yourself
And get with the plan
Show us your heart
We understand

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not a poet?

yet it seems you've captured others feelings as well as your own!!
well spoken, thank U bear, ramble on!
peace

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That`s very nice !!

Wow ,, very well said Bear !!

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what bear said!

me too!

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