Grateful Dead

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Polishing Grapes

No more twinnings Tea sips
Ghastly breath of dying witherings

A sumptuous spot on the couch
Noticed while falling asleep

Gored to the ends of torso
Making a long lost end-trail

Popular mechanics loosing jobs
A good day to say the least

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yes it is ...

& very haunting. "waves of dread come crashing in"
That's the part that gets me.

PEACE

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Mr. Pid

That "wind it down", really nice.

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nice, mr p

i sense a dark rocker with spiraling leads

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Wrote this many years ago

when I was in a deep, dark place. Don't know what made me think of it today. It has music as well.

You wake up all alone
and remember that they're gone
and you have to wind it down.
It's not the same old place,
it's missing another face
and you have to wind it down.

You know you hate this part
hoping for something to fill the void.
Try to find another way to deal.
Then waves of dread come crashing in
reminding you that pain is very real.

The empty pillow there
you toss it in the chair
cause you have to wind it down.
They won't be coming back
their life is on another track
and you have to wind it down.

Staring blankly into space
try to focus anywhere but there.
Searching for a sliver of the sun.
It doesn't help to scream again
no respite from your life that's come undone.

You sort through some old things
and fight back the tears they bring
cause you have to wind it down.
Sad, and all alone.
So sad, because they're gone
and you have to wind it down.

Conversation is always more interesting than recitation, so speak your mind and not someone else's.

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Gigi , Leanne , Marye

Thank you very much !! Thank anyone else who may be sending positve vibes !!
it`s gone for now but Doc. said it could come back anytime ,, hope it don`t ..

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what they said!

headache begone!

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ditto what Gigi said ..

Feel better Stuman :)

PEACE

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Stuman

so sad...turn that frown upside down :)

Nothing left today but smile smile smile.....

I hope your migraine's gone!!

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inside my head

my head is throbing
my head is pounding
I try to smile
but can only frown
like being a sad clown
I can not shake this frown
as my head keeps pounding
I continue my frowning
and the twinkle in my eye`s
starts to slowley die
drownding in my oun tears

8-5-08

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