Grateful Dead

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Shower of Love 8/22/08

I look at the stars
Floating in the sky
I'm stuck in a rut
And I wonder why
I need a jack
And I need a tow
I need a miracle
To get to the show

Along came a maiden
With love in her eyes
And for me she stopped
While I sat surprized
And then she said
May I give you a hand?
I'd like to help
I'm with the band

And I can see
You've been through enough
Come on and take
A shower of Love
Clean up yourself
And get with the plan
Show us your heart
We understand

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not a poet?

yet it seems you've captured others feelings as well as your own!!
well spoken, thank U bear, ramble on!
peace

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Joined: Nov 21 2007
That`s very nice !!

Wow ,, very well said Bear !!

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what bear said!

me too!

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Joined: Jul 20 2007
Bear!!!!!

I love it! What a grate Deadication to the Grateful Dead!
I am a Grateful Deadhead too :)

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im not a poet but here is my thanx to the dead..

u r the grateful dead
i am a grateful dead head
from jerrys crazy fingers
to bobby singin to me on one more saterday night
from pig shining his love light
to brent n his daughter on that wonderful night
for i have lost my ass(dancin)
to all my brothers n sisters take a step back
for this is the gratest fuckin band in the world
from phils box of rain
to vince letting me know its ok to samba in the rain
keith always let me know it ok to sing my blues away
n donna always blew me away
billy n mickey the beat is always in my heart
n
finally hunter with out u my friend there would b no grateful dead
so just for uncle bobo i wanna say from all of us dead heads thank you
for u r the grateful dead
n im a dead head

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thats cool peakin

keep splashin' that paint on the canvas! songs are but poems with music backin up the words!
martin mull to tom waits on fernwood tonite ... so when you sit down to write a song ,what do you write first, the lyrics or the words :)

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Joined: Mar 12 2008
no band

thanks Gigi and Marye, I'm trying to improve my song-writing, I hope the poet's don't mind. Still trying to paint my masterpiece.

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Very somber, Em-j

Like it very much!!!
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Don't part with your illusions. When they are gone, you will still exist, but you have ceased to live.
Samuel Clemens

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green glass

they wait in the dark den
on the pin striped couch
with the glowing glass lanterns above
solemnly picking at their food
on the green glass dishes
while the woman in the broken armchair
in the corner
with the black bow
in her graying hair
sits in sorrow sadness
waiting for nowhere

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